We have been recrafting our sentences. Look at how we improved: 'Lily O'Lee shook the sauce.'

Lily OLee tripped over and shook the sauce like a mad dog.
BY LIAM and Jordan

Lily O' Lee was shaking the sauce and there was sauce where there had never been before.
by Jack

Dreamily, Lily O'lee shook the sause crazily as she was dancing as rapidly as a working piston.
By Joseph.

With wobbly fingers, silly Lilly O'Lee madly shook
the sauce so it splattereed on her face.
by Ariel and Kaela.

Lily'O'Lee jumped like a kangaroo fiercely as she shook the sauce.
Lily'O'Lee sang songs slowly with a soft voice as she shook the sauce.
By Megan Shannon and Nina Matenga.

Lily O'Lee shook the sauce singing and swinging.
By Jade Nicole Morgan.

Lily O'Lee shook the sauce stupidly like a maniac.
by Codie Nikayla and Raewyn.

Lily olee crazily shook the sauce.
lily olee shook the sauce and she felt dizzy.
by Saskia,and Taryn

Lily o'Lee shook the ketchup like a mad bull.
By Rhys

Lily o' Lee shook the BQ sauce as hard as a dog wagging its tail.
by TJ

Lily O'Lee jumped on the tramp while shaking the ketchup
by Tiaho.

LiLy O'Lee shook the ketchup like a lunatic
by Mason